1. Clear, pleasant voice. 2. No muttering or stuttering. 3. Pace of speaking was perfect. 4. You covered most of the required information. 5. It was interesting that she was a childhood friend of the president’s sister. 6. It was interesting that she was passionate about her family’s privacy and guarded the family quarters from reporters.
Weaknesses
- There was a lot of background noise in your presentation. You need to record in a quieter place. - You laughed during your presentation. That is not professional. - You didn’t mention whether or not she had siblings.
Krall
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Clear, pleasant voice.
2. No muttering or stuttering.
3. Pace of speaking was perfect.
4. You covered most of the required information.
5. It was interesting that she was a childhood friend of the president’s sister.
6. It was interesting that she was passionate about her family’s privacy and guarded the family quarters from reporters.
Weaknesses
- There was a lot of background noise in your presentation. You need to record in a quieter place.
- You laughed during your presentation. That is not professional.
- You didn’t mention whether or not she had siblings.
Overall grade 28/30